Freespirit Juneja

Rookie (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Your Beautiful Smile


Life is a mystical winding
Woven around happy and sad things
It flows like ripples of water
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

1st Stanza Life has made the poet so busy that he has forgotten the happiness of his love/ mate 's is next to him of his love/ mate 's

2nd stanza the loneliness has become the friend of the poet and he has forgotten that his happiness is next to him

3rd stanza describes the beauty of the smile and the magic power it confers

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  • Rookie - 67 Points Guess Who (6/12/2012 6:55:00 PM)

    Nice poem i love it well expressed and simply EXCELLENT.......... Guess Who (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adam Lally (6/6/2012 10:16:00 AM)

    hey, nice poem, some really great imagery! there are some polysyllabic words that felt a bit out of place but maybe thats just me: D keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nova Saleh (6/5/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    I LOVE this poem its absolutely brilliant I can tell its well thought out :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (6/5/2012 2:25:00 PM)

    Seeing Light in a smile radiating from within, beauty revealed. Beautiful poem, I love the way you describe every detail and your observation is sublime. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,027 Points Neela Nath (6/5/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Amidst the lingering tune of sadness of perishable world it's the beautiful smile of ladylove which wipes the grief of the sorrow burdened mind.The smile is thus drawn on the vast canvas of life.Moving. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Louis Borgo (5/26/2012 7:40:00 PM)

    like the poem the word play could be better but other that it great take Life is a perplexing labyrinth
    Woven around happy and sad things the content is there but connection to the read with emotion is a lil blank...
    i give it a 9! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/22/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    A reservoir of beautiful and moving words that magically dance in every line of this touching write bringing harmony to the entire script! Well crafted with rich imagery! Wisdom is filtered through your magic pen! 10+++ Thank you for sharing once again and keep it up, young man! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful smile,
    A beautiful heaven craft was made
    Eternally touch your innocent face
    Shining my darkness like a moon at night
    Warm like every second hit by the day sunlight
    Beautiful smile easy to give but hard to keep
    When you feel bad just a smile
    because it a sign of a heaven made
    .....that is my version :) LOL credit for you as the owner of the original idea_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Parithi Muthurasan (4/17/2012 3:09:00 AM)

    The melodramatic life has made me fragile
    Only to be protected and cared by your beautiful smile...........the power of smiling expressed in your poem
    thanks........parithi (Report) Reply

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