Your A Man With... Poem by Makayla Straight

Your A Man With...

Rating: 5.0


I look at you I see a man
But not just a man
A man with a past
A man with big dreams
I don't care about your past
And I don't want to be in your way of your dreams
Your a man who needs freedom
I am in your way
So no more
You'll go your own way
And I will go y way
Don't let me stop you
Don't let me bring you down
Just leave
Don't worry about goodbyes
Your a man with needs
Your a man who has wants
I am not everything to your expectations
I look at you I see a man
Who has his freedom now...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 22 July 2009

Well line 11 has a mistake.... Ok about this poem...I wonder you this man is.....? Well is not me....readers.... You see a man...hmmmm this poem makes me think....... very interesting....and well expressed maybe i should tell this man you are a good girl......hahaha anyway you did well and I enjoy this poem With your mystery man............

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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