Your Poem by ally lira

Your



your white as snow
soft as cotton
cold as a winter breeze.

you broke my heart
but still i'm here living
through each minute of every day.

you're sweet as sugar
hot as fire
smooth as silk

but please,
you put me through nothing but
grief and misery.

you're strong as an ox
skinny as a post
high as the highest kite

i loved you so much
you were always on my mind
and in my dreams.

you're drunk as a lover
smart as a monkey
and quick as a spider

my heart is falling freely
drowning from my tears
that you caused me to cry.

and yet,

you're white as sonw
soft as cotton
cold as a winter breeze
you're sweet as sugar
hot as fire
smooth as silk

but please,

you're strong as an ox
skinny as a post
high as the highest kite
you're drunk as a lover
smart as monkey
quick as a spider.

all of these make who you are,
you are derk-a-derk,
a complete jerk-a-jerk.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alyza RealOne 10 June 2008

i am not sure if you are saying the guy is good or bad but either way it was still good

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success