Young People Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Young People



Africa needs sacrifice
Fully pledged promises
"Head shall bow for country
And for the powerful creator and almighty

I read about sex talk
Hand in hand with silent walk
It is must for each individual
To treat the national interest as not casual

Country is blessed with natural resources
Only needs equal distribution with amicable force
It needs bond and cordial foundation
Beginning of new and stable relation

How fair name is shrouded with black spots?
Unnecessary blood shed us caused and fought
Who will improve upon for poor people?
Can any one speak about peaceful struggle?

I want young people of patriotic nature
To come forward and make sure
Country can not be taken to safety
Until people are poverty stricken and living with pity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Very beautiful message you have conveyed through this poem. I want young people of patriotic nature To come forward and make sure Country can not be taken to safety Until people are poverty stricken and living with pity A thoughtful message for youngsters. They can do a lot for our country. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Good poem Jason Campbell21 minutes ago Strong and emotive. Feelings against injustice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Great poem Thandiwe Nyamasvisva23 minutes ago And I am not just saying that because I am an African myself! However the last two paragraphs seem very contradictory. Was that an error or intentional? Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago not intentional.. strongly needed awareness among people

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Africa needs sacrifice Fully pledged promises

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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