You Were Still There Poem by JRose S

You Were Still There



When time passed us by
I could still count on you
Everything changed
But you were still there
When the stars moved
Across the sky
And the tears fell down
Like a rain shower
You were still there
We've kept each other's secrets
Laughed at each others jokes
Created many memories
Never meant to be forgotten
When life challanged our friendship
You were still there
I could never thank you enough
You truly are the greatest
I love you
Thank-you for so much

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Polar Bear 13 August 2007

i like it.. good job

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wow...this is soo cute!

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Geoff Warden 12 August 2007

This also is a nice touch, very realistic as if u were talking stright to me or any other reader.........well done..

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