You Were Being Brave Poem by Bob Oldfield

You Were Being Brave

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I know you wanted a fairytale ending
Where he
And she
Would ride off into the sunset
Expecting to live happily
Ever after

I know I promised a promising future
Where you
And I
Would reach for distant stars
Through faith
Of astronomical proportions

I know I said that I would be writing.
From me..
To you.
But from the day that my gaze was turned,
By laying down my pen, my silence wrote
A sad goodbye

I know the depth of pain that I was causing
You
But I
Could think of nothing more than
How to say I can't be there
To make it
What you wanted

Don't worry, you told me
But you were being brave

I'm sorry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 26 June 2007

Very touching. It also takes a brave soul to be so genuine. As always, Sandra

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Bob Oldfield

Bob Oldfield

Liverpool, UK / Vernon, BC
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