You Were A Dream To Me Poem by Asma Khan

You Were A Dream To Me

Rating: 3.5


Your dream came to me so true,
as if you touched me again with your love

Your words struck me like arrows,
like falling on an empty, barren field

Your memories embraced my heart,
with growing sorrows and pain

Your silence poked all unspoken words,
that tore my wishes' feathers apart

Your departure took my soul away,
as if I buried myself in your grave

Your love taught me to hate,
for my heart is dead and barren now

Your ignorance took me to the doorstep of ego,
just like strangers meet and part

Your presence touched my dreams and broke them,
like falling stars of desire burn on their way to life

Sunday, August 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Words would not be enough for a such great grief.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 24 August 2014

a disturbing if lucid write... its simple....free form and well directed. amply conveys the intended feelings nice liked

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Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2014

A beautiful poem with a nice caption. Your last two lines remind me of my poem titled 'Love Burns'..

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Asma Khan 22 December 2015

Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your comments.

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