You Walked Away! Poem by Craig Piercy

You Walked Away!

Rating: 5.0


The day you walked away
I watched you leave
Begging you to stay
Instead, you left me to grieve
I knew you felt there was nothing more to retrieve

Leave, leave, and go now
For today I decree, with absolutely passion
That tomorrow
There will not be any more sorrow

The day you walked away
I swore to never see you again
It was raining in my insides
Besides
You left me, you went
No more flowers to be sent

Leave, leave, and go now
For today I decree, with absolute passion
That tomorrow
There will not be anymore sorrow

So now I say good-bye, so long
I only hope you weren't wrong!

The day you walked away
My heart died, yet yours was free
My heart no longer full of glee

Leave, leave, and go now
For today I decree, with absolute passion
That tomorrow
There will not be anymore sorrow

The day you walked away
The day you walked away

Finally, my heart beats to a new song
So today I too am now free, so long!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 June 2011

Good poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Very well conceived. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Craig Piercy

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Hamilton New Zealand
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