Aisha Sherazi

Rookie (London, UK)

You've Made Me Aware


You've made me aware,
You've opened my eyes,
Never saw things this way,
Before.

You've made me aware,
You've opened my heart,
Never felt things this way,
Before.

You've made me aware,
You've opened my mind,
Never thought these things,
Before.

You've made me aware,
Of your beautiful soul,
Never knew this door,
Could be opened before.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 17, 2006

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  • Rookie Will Barber (2/27/2007 1:26:00 AM)

    Could be set to a torch-song accompaniment - truly, a fine work, Aisha. - Will (Report) Reply

  • Rookie P K (6/17/2006 6:15:00 AM)

    simply great
    not getting words to describe you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elya Thorn (5/22/2006 4:18:00 PM)

    Oh this is so good, it's haunting.... it would be sooo great to be the lyrics of a song! It has that really great flowing to it!

    ~~Elya Thorn~~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (5/17/2006 10:12:00 AM)

    Aisha, love has a way of opening many previously concealed emotions. Excellent write! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

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