You Touched My Heart Poem by me poet yeps poet

You Touched My Heart

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You have great independence of mind and thought you touched my heartwhen you said yes and then when you moved on to a newer forest to find newer seeds let mennotfeel only they can breed with their seed The forests are widespread with all kindsapples pines oranges and peaches all have their own delicacies. Think not that you are alone the seed of vine which can be turnedto red wine.
Women today know they have suffered much so why prolong the misery let's end the mystery, you are in life a forgotten history. Move on please the road has six lanes and in both directions you seek your own horizon. I HAVE MADE UP MY MIND NOW LET US PROCEED to our newer destinations


The roads lead to opposite directions
we must chose our own
what is the need to moan
when you can lead
a better life alone

why be slaves
to mastersso very unkind
we all also
now have our own mind
Move on
look not behind
I will not be seen
you will feel
you are blind

Saturday, March 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hubby,life,separation,wife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
This prosaic cum poetry
towards the end
is a 17th Century
creation then
Being resurrected now by
poetry men
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 05 March 2019

Let us proceed to the next destination with the strength of stainless steel footsteps and iron mind through the muddy road as a first traveler

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 March 2019

IS THIS UR ADVICE ANSWER OR UR OWN POETRY PLEASE DO SMS ME THANKS SSSSSSSS PPPPPPPPPPPP

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Prabir Gayen 03 March 2019

why be slaves to mastersso very unkind we all also now have our own mind Move on look not behind I will not be seen you will feel you are blind....beautiful... Each one is a separate island...Love Dear Poet...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 March 2019

I FEEL there should be only one poem posted a day each day So many I have seenon many walls unread I will be away for a week hope all will continue to read me I may post one today Tired as I am dance all night @80nat a pre wedding of just a newly to be wedded couple thinking I was as young But old bones cannot match the youthful ones which need to yet hatch

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Rajnish Manga 03 March 2019

why be slaves / to masters so very unkind we all also / now have our own mind.... //.... The emancipation of human mind is a timeless dream. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 March 2019

your kindness to uderstand is boundless o RM JI

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