ramesh rai

Gold Star - 13,404 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

You Told Me - Poem by ramesh rai

the most inner part of my body
that is my soul
is the parts of Yours
more luminous than
thousands of sun
covered by the clouds of appetite, fear, anger, greed, arrogance, delusion and all evil elements
have one day to be dispersed
entire elements have to be destroyed, by the end of great devastation till then,
you have to rotate
within your different countenance

May I ask you the existence of life
devoid of all those evil elements

Your reply was very simple
life has nothing to do
with all those evil elements
life is yours, bestowed to lead a peaceful and delighted life
no need to possess those evil elements,
your soul is thorough and complete essence
listen your soul in each of your action
certainly, paradise is ascertained


Comments about You Told Me by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 8,908 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/28/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    Listen your soul in each of your action...Wonderful write. Each and every line to beautifully written... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/27/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    wonderful poem Ramesh...

    the most inner part of my body
    that is my soul
    is the parts of Yours..

    like Elena has put it, maybe we are part of each other..
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,794 Points Elena Sandu (7/24/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    the most inner part of my body
    that is my soul
    is the parts of Yours
    more luminous than
    thousands of sun
    Loved those words I can feel to be true as I guess our souls are connected to everything, could also mean we are part of each other. Maybe we've just lost the memory of it. Thank you for your beautiful and wise poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,895 Points Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    your last stanza is so enlightening. love this write. the soul of man is supreme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/23/2013 3:36:00 PM)

    I like it, paradise is the soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 95 Points Masereka Amos (7/23/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    no need to possess those evil elements, great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Manonton Dalan (7/22/2013 5:30:00 PM)

    very nice ramesh.. i do listen to my soul
    even in writing. have a very nice day. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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