You Told Me Poem by ramesh rai

You Told Me



the most inner part of my body
that is my soul
is the parts of Yours
more luminous than
thousands of sun
covered by the clouds of appetite, fear, anger, greed, arrogance, delusion and all evil elements
have one day to be dispersed
entire elements have to be destroyed, by the end of great devastation till then,
you have to rotate
within your different countenance

May I ask you the existence of life
devoid of all those evil elements

Your reply was very simple
life has nothing to do
with all those evil elements
life is yours, bestowed to lead a peaceful and delighted life
no need to possess those evil elements,
your soul is thorough and complete essence
listen your soul in each of your action
certainly, paradise is ascertained

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 22 July 2013

very nice ramesh.. i do listen to my soul even in writing. have a very nice day.

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no need to possess those evil elements, great write

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 July 2013

Listen your soul in each of your action...Wonderful write. Each and every line to beautifully written...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 27 July 2013

wonderful poem Ramesh... the most inner part of my body that is my soul is the parts of Yours.. like Elena has put it, maybe we are part of each other.. Siya_! !

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Elena Sandu 24 July 2013

the most inner part of my body that is my soul is the parts of Yours more luminous than thousands of sun Loved those words I can feel to be true as I guess our souls are connected to everything, could also mean we are part of each other. Maybe we've just lost the memory of it. Thank you for your beautiful and wise poem!

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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

your last stanza is so enlightening. love this write. the soul of man is supreme

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R.j. Wynn 23 July 2013

I like it, paradise is the soul.

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