You Say Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

You Say

Rating: 5.0


Even as you say
You love me
I hear you from some distant
Tunnel of my mind say
Go away...
Feel you push me aside
For one less important
You say...
For, I am after all
After her...
You say
To lose me is to break your heart
You say
To lose her
All your wordly, tangible
Treasures
And you must not!
So I walk
Alone
While in full view of the world
Harboring your love as some sacred peace...
And yet
Though I am all in encompassed passion,
You say -
I know I am no one!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Menon 09 October 2009

its a nice poem indeed

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Iris Washington 27 April 2007

This is so deep. The way you write the poem, make you feel the pain.

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... Sheila 26 April 2007

Oh, such sadness and heartache....hopelessness. You write it so well that the reader feels your pain. Very good write. Top marks.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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