You Remain In My Writings Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s
You Remain In My Writings
Love is a love
And remains always as a love
It comes and fades
It starts and remains
But where?
Love happens and where it is next?
We get involved in love
We feel our breath in it
Still we can't capture it
But why?
Deep hearted dew still wet
One perfect love
But where? but why?
Where shall I capture it?
How?
Well, She is gone and here
I must remain
In my words in her
Love will remain and grow
By poetry and songs
I capture you here
Right here in my poems
As you are a prisoner somewhere.
This is a very nicely written piece; you obviously have a talent for writing poetry about human feelings now is the time to work at it....Well done. I find with poetry one needs to concentrate on choice of words sometimes what I use one day I'm not satisfied with the next....sometimes a poem can start out one way and after years can be picked up again and re worked so building a solid base is very necessary. Just a few tips here hope they help.
Well done! it captures the senses and puts them on a roller coaster of emotion. Good job.
well done! smooth flowing of feeling of love in your writing
Very smooth flow.... love the brilliant way of expressing how you've captured her in your writings. Beautiful :)
capturing that pure essence; anyone who's ever been in love and lost it knows this feeling
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 11:02:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Love comes and goes at times.