You Never Have To Dream Poem by Kevin Patrick

You Never Have To Dream

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A dream is an illusion
Whereas an objective is valid
Coordinate your passions
To purposeful intentions
Optimizing commitment
For rational solutions
Then when you reached the end
And established the pinnacle
It becomes so much clear
You never have to dream

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 05 August 2012

good debate but dreams are no illusion they are the vision of the mind for which goal to follow...without dreams we have nothing...all the rest of your poem is spot on...regards

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Walterrean Salley 03 August 2012

Hi Patrick. Reality starts with a step. I think dreams play their part in spurring us on; I see them as hope (anticipation) . However, as you’ve eloquently said, it’s reality that we’re really after. Interestingly crafted.

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Wise message, Patrick...Dreams are good for thespirit, good for emtying ones mind...however it is reality that gets the job done, your objectives achieved...and thus...make those dreams become reality...Solid write ~FjR~

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