You Make Me Smile Anyway Poem by Erika Michelle

You Make Me Smile Anyway

Rating: 4.0


im not having a good day,
so please quit trying to make me smile.
i dont want you to care so much
could you just quit for once?
you dont know this
but you fill me with so much bliss
i secretly think i love you
i secretly wish for you and not my beau.
you dont know this, but
everytime you give me a hug,
my heart goes ba-dum, thud thud
your in love with my best friend
or so you said,
so what can I say?
I wasnt having a good day
but you make me smile anyway :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Sabo 21 December 2009

i like that one, i love the suprise ending, the situational irony, it made me laugh out loud.

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Sherbanu Molu 24 November 2009

Nice one. Esp. the BA-DUM THUD, THUD. It is really good to put some humorous phrases in poems. lol. it reallly makes me smile

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Ramesh T A 04 November 2009

Nice to read your poem! It makes me smile! Best wishes!

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