The Crow


You Killed Me - Poem by The Crow

You came to my funeral
And you cried
Your the one that killed me
With all your lies

Death is nothingness
No Heaven nor Hell
I'm stuck in limbo
You put me in this cell

Time no longer matters
The world passes me by
You've made me a ghost
I wish you'd tell me why

THE END

Topic(s) of this poem: happy, heartache, life, love, love and friendship, sad


Comments about You Killed Me by The Crow

  • (1/20/2017 10:12:00 PM)

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    A poem portraying extreme anguish over the wounds inflicted by the world outside. The words, the rhyme are well-chosen to express the severe distress.. The people who inflict such injuries, may be, do not understand the agony one is subjected to.. Marvelous one..100++ (Report) Reply

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  • (1/20/2017 9:03:00 PM)


    Profound and shrouded in mystery. Gotta love it! (Report) Reply

  • Judith Blatherwick (1/18/2017 6:30:00 PM)


    I agree with Andy. This reads as a very deep piece of writing. It is filled with anguish. An excellently executed poem. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (1/18/2017 5:10:00 PM)


    Nicely penned a call for eternity or redemption at hand Very deep poem with so many facets and interpretation enjoyed the tangled web you wove 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Noah Buddy (1/18/2017 4:29:00 PM)

    i hear
    I heard the music and food and weed are fantastic
    at that bar called LIMBO
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 24, 2017


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