You Kept Your Promise Prose Poem by Heather Burns

You Kept Your Promise Prose



On an August morning not so long ago.
I was making myself busy, starting
to run my errands for the day.

The sun was brightly shining. It was
a beautiful day.I felt more lite and
happier than usual.

I had just left my home, driving my
car. I was alone, windows open, when
suddenly a cool breeze blew in my face.

I felt a presence enter my car, taking
up space in the passengers seat.I
felt as though someone had entered the
car with me. I instantly glanced in that
direction to check it out. The seat was
empty, but the presence was strong and
lingered for several seconds.

Thoughts began to run through my mind.
I remembered words once spoken to me.I
will never leave you, like your shadow,
I'll be with you always, I promise. I
whispered something in return.

Just as quickly as it came, it was gone.
I was emotionally spent. Tears filled my
eyes I was forced to stop the car, and
gain my composure.

Oh face of yesterday, you kept your promise.
































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Unwritten Soul 02 October 2011

Haunted feeling really mystery and you make this as a mystery poetry which is i like so much...I love the words saying the shadow always follow behind, it really having some meaning...we all know what it all mean and what it can bring..Truly i feel this is mystery poem that i like to read_Unwritten Soul

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

superb write....well done

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Jim Troy 09 September 2011

So delicate and powerful and fulfilling all rolled into one. Brilliant and I loved reading it. Jim Troy

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