You Cried Last Night Poem by Cigeng Zhang

You Cried Last Night

Rating: 5.0


You cried last night
I caressed my moonlight
as if I had touched a drizzling night

You cried last night
I stood at my balcony
and upraised a bunch of peony

You cried last night
I was in the deep night
and accompanied you to dawning light

Wednesday, November 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2016

Love and joy! ! With the muse of the dawning light. Nice work.

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Ernest Makuakua 17 February 2016

BEAUTIFUL PIECE WELL NICELY WRITTEN

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Daniel Brick 17 December 2014

There is a striking, impressive interplay between the repetition in the first line of each stanza followed by the vivid, varied imagery in lines two and three of each. This is a tender poem, it calls forth compassion in the reader which parallels that of the speaker of the poem. There is a hurting heart, perhaps deeply wounded by unkindness, but that suffering calls forth spontaneous caring, with no-strings-attached, that is, the person who hears and responds is acting out of pure love for another human being in need. This is the kind of poem that increases our faith in people, and that is a fine servce poetry can fufill.

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Amos O. Ojwang' 27 November 2014

I also cried last night because you've been quiet all this long. A well written poem...good work done.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 26 November 2014

You cried last night I was in the deep night and accompanied you to dawning light A beautiful love poem where poet wants to be with the lover to pass through all hardships of life.Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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