You Can Call Me Your........Hero Poem by karen banks

You Can Call Me Your........Hero



I am argumentative yes a debater

so ou know that i have them haters

but it's okay cuz i keep them under my shoe

I play them so hard they dont know what to do

my lyrics are so hot

you could say there on fire

you want to try so now you a tryer

you like to buy so I'ma call u a buyer

YOU JUST LIED I'MA CALL YOU A LIAR

SORRY DONT CRY YOU JUST GOT FIRED

I try to stay on top

and even then I'm still climbing

I'm storm and your jus lighting

me and you you just cant compare

you are just water and baby I am air

without me you could not surrive

you could call me your hero

cuz I'm the reason your still alive

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Purdy 25 January 2012

Good rhythm. I can hear you chanting this. For what it is, I think its good. The piece is about 'self-justification'. I hope it gave you that. I would ask only this: what exactly do you intend it to do for the reader?

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