You Came In My Life(Senryu) Poem by Neela Nath Das

You Came In My Life(Senryu)

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You came in my life,
My home again did revive;
Oh! my kitchen knife!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aasiq the poet 02 May 2012

this haiku has got tremendous depth of meaning in it. i must say the use of the twin words did revive instead of revived is a master stroke...it shows the efforts at coming to life is from within and not by any external stimulus...it shows the poem is an positive and affirmative one, and not a nihilist one...it shows the maturity of the poet, , thanks madam for this brilliant piece of poetry....

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Indira Babbellapati 08 April 2012

such unexpected twist... enjoyed!

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Pheko Motaung 05 April 2012

It is a beautiful poem! You're brilliant well done

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:) this piece of write... Is so cute...... I like it... Nicely done

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Wabi Sabi 28 March 2012

it's very fun and charming! ! that must tell your charactor! ^^

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