You Broke Me So Badly That I Don'T Want To Live Now Poem by Vizard Dhawan

You Broke Me So Badly That I Don'T Want To Live Now

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death;
remorse;
solution;
pathways;
heartless;
lifeless;
yet I pray for you,
being God bless.
you broke me so badly
that I don't want to live now
life has become a burden
for me; for you
life is a party; every night
catch the pray'that innocent one
I wanted to live
with you forever,
but you gave me a shock

tears;
loneliness;
heart broke;
I too;
only one thing I want
from this world;
please;
somebody;
give me
poison...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosey Milkenson 16 December 2012

really good, describes what we are thinking of :)

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Bri Edwards 04 December 2012

vizard/vishal, 'life has become a burden'......a true sign of depression. look for another girl! do you write from experience or make-believe? i wonder about the significance of solution near the beginning. do you mean the write pray or prey?

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