You Are Young Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Are Young



You prepare
And dare
To change
Reality and manage

Think of earth as sky
And try
To walk in space
With no feelings of race

You are dark cloud
And speak loud
In background of white sky
That you want to fly

You shall have enough of joy
To enjoy
With change of mood
As nicely understood

You give good bye
To frustration and try
With some other way
That shall keep happiness to stay

You are young
And should never go wrong
Life is so beautiful
So try to be successful

Monday, September 15, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2014

You prepare And dare

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

fantastic Mike Brindley13 minutes ago keep going Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

it speaks to me Eddie Thompson9 minutes ago it's hard to be an artist honestly it just reality how people just doubt me

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

Great rhyming! SarahKnova Woods14 minutes ago I really enjoyed this poem! It was a thinker :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

DEC ent Caleb Turner14 minutes ago Decent Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

Good Sherry Harris13 minutes ago some nice words

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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