Soumita Sarkar Ray

Veteran Poet - 1,674 Points (Kolkata)

You Are My Dream.... - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

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Till your heart my long search ends
You turn into a hope that remains
Shoots of my desires started to settle
To find a corner in you to huddle
Day begins only to feel you closer
Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear
Still the eagerness to know you more
Gives a tug and leads me to a door
Door shall open the recess of your mind
Deep layers of your being thus I find
Each pulse and cell echoes in your name
Your hair, your sweat, touch and game
To narrate in you a life that is mine
I wish to be your part that is my twine
We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
With feathers of me and you twined and woven

Comments about You Are My Dream.... by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Rookie - 57 Points Asoke Kumar Mitra (1/27/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    excellent write.the imagery used here very nice.very heart wrenching write.............. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (11/9/2013 10:29:00 PM)

    very deep and lovely expression that touch the heart (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:29:00 PM)

    lovely expression of your dream. very passionate (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    deep layers of your being thus I find. a beautiful passionate write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/29/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Passionate like WW and Frah commented I am Agreed with her thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (9/27/2013 1:49:00 PM)

    very energetic n passionate in nature.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,514 Points Elena Sandu (9/18/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    Door shall open the recess of your mind
    Deep layers of your being thus I find I loved those words here's my wonder: Are we meant to know and love them all? Deep layers of the mind with every thought and joke like sudden turns, each beat of heart, the restless body with calculated charm? Hm... Most of us get the gift of one or the other. If one will give them all would other one become a god or very scared will turn its back? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (9/18/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    Lovely, a match from heaven, and probably a dream
    come true. the eloquence of a passionate poetess,
    expressed in words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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