You Are Backward By 5,000 Years Poem by john tiong chunghoo

You Are Backward By 5,000 Years

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it takes so long
for us to come to
each other

you are backward

i have been waiting
for five thousand years
to talk to you

to you
the earth turns round
only to record each man's tale
to us
the importance of night and day
and now it unreels
my secret to you

your earnestness
in cracking the earth
for all its treasury -
human tales stored in
electrons, protons
has paid off

my soul glows so brightly
i am as good as alive

just keep on talking to me
keep the device going
you are 5,000 years late

this thought that has waited for so long to get this going

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 14 April 2006

What a wonderfully wise poem! Your insight is exceptional. Warm regards, Sandra

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***** ********* 14 April 2006

My favourite words of this decade John! Apart from the obvious ones I yearn to hear of course! my soul glows so brightly i am as good as alive Thank you for this wonderfully uplifting poem Smiling at you, becus I want to Tai

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Danni Doodles 14 April 2006

Absolutely wonderful. I love your poetry because you say it so Straight.

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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