You And Me Poem by Akhtar Jawad

You And Me

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You are my past,
You are my present, too,
You are my future, as well,
I don't care,
Whether you are mine,
Or not,
You are a friend,
You are an enemy, too,
In any case come to me,
Although you are so close,
That I can touch you,
But look into my eyes,
Still they invite you,
But you don't come,
The earth is the same,
The sky is the same,
I know we cannot meet,
With the mortal bodies,
But the journey of future,
With the souls that are free,
Free to fly like clouds,
Who can stop the clouds?
I know the fire of Heer,
Is dormant in you,
You too, must know,
The fire of Rnjha,
Isn't extuinguished,
But the book of love,
Heer by Waris Shah,
Still survives,
I know you still sing,
On the other bank of the river,
You are still a beauty,
And so is your voice.

In a moonlit night,
With a veil on your face,
Come to me,
Unveil your face,
Have a kiss of the eyes,
Be a little shy,
It will add an element,
An element of glory,
In your lovely face,
And then you recite,
Verses of Waris Shah,
The flood in Chenab,
Is deadly and furious,
Have courage from Sohni,
And this time Mahiwal,
Will not let you drowned,
In a wet moonlit night,
Come to the sleepless,
And sing the Heer,
He will not bother you again,
He will sleep forever!

(Heer a claasical Punjabi long poem, Heer the beautiful heroine and Ranjha the lover.
Waris Shah a great classical Punjabi poet,
Shoni Mahiwal a famous Punjabi love story, Sohni tried to cross the flooded Chenab to meet Mahiwal but was drowned and when Mahiwal saw her drowning he also dived in the flooded river)

Sunday, November 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A independent translation of my Urdu poem Hum Tum)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 November 2014

With the souls that are free, Free to fly like clouds, Who can stop the clouds? Though separated physically, the lovers hope to meet in spirit form! Like clouds, their spirits are free to roam anywhere! A great poem on the immortality of man- woman love!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

The love and truth walked side by side Sufism - The Haqeeqi love and that was the truth as symbolism nice one

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Heather Wilkins 11 November 2014

beautiful poem of love have a kiss of the eyes be a little shy nice writing

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Salini Nair 04 November 2014

journey of future, With the souls that are free, Free to fly like clouds, Who can stop the clouds? ..........................beautifully presented lost love....

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 November 2014

A beautiful poem on lost love.

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Saheb Mohapatra 03 November 2014

beautifully described the feelings of a lover.........yes, a lover is an enemy, also a friend which loves that never dies........good poem.....thanks

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem describing where love can flow beyond this mortal body and love can meet even in eternal souls. Beautiful examples of great lovers who gave away their life for their love. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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