You And I Poem by Unwritten Soul

You And I

Rating: 4.6


Written love in the sky
We did in glory time
When i had you
And you always have me

Be one
You and I
We now be together again
As we have written a promise
Something that unbroken by time
We climbed to the moon
And hides our secrets
It does shine still
Stay in bliss
Because you believe in me
No reason for me for you to leave

You and I
Like those stars there
Millions of memories we shared
Permanently in full phase
Safe in my heart place
No other place to keep
Have to dive in me deep
Impossible to erase
Because my heart is your place
To remember all again each second we together
Treasure scent of Joy, smiles and laughter
Even in sad our day still enjoyable
Amnesia could never cross over
These memories you keep in your death
I'll taste this sweet until my last breathe

You and I
Forever
We both know
Love never turn away
This built our own days
Just in own simply ways
And no perfect word can say
It just was a perfect world everyday
When you and I be there at the moon's bay

You and I
Sealed our oath
For only loves come close
Just forgiveness we need if you i hurt
Somehow there is no way for me to do it
Trust me as we bury our promise in the moon
Because you ensure me a meaning of kindness
As you said love always forgiving
Then i know the oath we keep in depth
As it deeper to anyone to dive
As you again still alive

Life never reverse
I am glad I had you to share all
When I was young, from you i learned
Loves, care and wisdom..if i am universe
Mystery it is but shine me all

Together we are a day,
living a memory under the same sky
As if I am the dark night
Pleased us with the black blanket sky and shiny stars
While you ahead me as a bright day
Oh your day and my night prime
We maybe separated by space and time
As love reunite
When we together, we be perfect one
To be a complete day
Like night and day
As you and I

And
Loves
You and I
Forever this way

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written specially to my late grandparents,
wonderful day is everyday, the moment i can spend time with you all
_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 19 October 2010

Good poem and well exposed relation with the dearest one. Love and live....the ultimate wisdom could be the reach of a social human being. Write more......run long and excavate your soul to write.........10/10 Regards, pranab

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 31 December 2010

A well worded mystic poem.

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Rekha Mandagere 16 March 2011

The concept of sweet memories, responsibilities, oaths centered around a Relationship is beautifully expressed in this poem. I really appreciate the technique of implementation of an abstract idea through a well designed process.

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Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. 02 August 2011

this is a sweet, beautiful piece...

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Cristina Teodor 25 September 2011

Beautiful poem and i like so much end of poem, the unity you have created between 'day' and ' night' as among 'you and i', an universal, indestructible bond..Cristina Teodor

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2020

beautiful tribute poem to Grandparents //// you and me on the flying wings of imagination to the delighted sun we are safe there as the part of galaxies.....................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2018

Passing time with grandparents is remarkable. Though they are no more yet their love and affection is unforgettable. It is a nice tribute to them having touching penmanship. Thank you dear Soul for sharing this lovely one.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

Forever this way! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Frank James Davis 12 April 2013

Grandparents are, unfortunately, often overlooked, and too quickly forgotten. You will be blessed, Soul, for remembering to honor them. Heartwarming!

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Lola Montez 02 November 2012

This is a tittle of the last Bernard Bertolluci's film

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