Every word from my mind to my pen
Each verse I create today since then
Every poem from my heart to my brain
To you I offer time and time again
The song I sing every time I am blue
The tune I hum when I am missing you
Come see the signs, look at each clue
Find how they all point out to you.
Because you are the soothing voice
That calms my every pain
You are the gentle breeze
You relax and make me sane
You make me laugh you make me smile
You come rescuing in just a while.
It is you who makes me-ME
With you I am completely happy
You are the one without a doubt
The only one I can't live without.
That was nice relaxed rhyme to display an engaged and lovely poem.
Beautiful verse written from the lover to the beloved, the truth and pain of an absent lover expressed in 'I Miss You'.
You are the gentle breeze You relax and make me sane You make me laugh you make me smile You come rescuing in just a while You have done an embellishment very agile Poetry embraces your life like Egypt did with river Nile Superb write......
Beautiful verses to express how unique can be for you someone you love.These rhymes are so soothing to my ears, so full with passion.Very nice poem..Cristina Teodor
I applaud all the poets who have penned here the beautiful feelings of their beautiful minds, having read this beautiful piece of poetry. I find a share of my own feelings in each of the comments here. Long live love, the lovers and the loved ones!
It is you who makes me-ME With you I am completely happy You are the one without a doubt The only one I can't live without. Thanks for sharing these nice feelings, for whoever they are meant. All lovers would be happy to hear such nice loving words. Over all, the poem is an excellent one, a reader's delight.
This poem has moved me so much,10 out of 10 (I would give more if possible) ! ! !
One of my favourites by you (no pun intended) it really showcases a good balance of ryhthm, and its a very infectious and warm message. Everyone could use your sentiments, very cheerful.
YOU AND YOU....means everything to me...(Suerte naman niya) sweet piece with wonderful rhymes.. it's like a music..refreshing..expressive...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very enchanting indeed. The whole poem is full of the fragrance of love. Your dedication is really marvellous. Great write. Thank for sharing. Please read my poem 'My ultimate companion' on p.3