You Poem by Carla Pizano

You

Rating: 5.0


You,
I loved you,
I gave you my heart,
you were my world,
you made me smile, laugh, have a swell time,
and you were the one who made me cry, have anger, and wanting to kill myself,
I thought you really loved me,
I thought I really loved you
I guess I was wrong,
because,
now that I know that you didn’t care,
that you never had my heart,
you wasn’t my world,
you didn’t really mean to make me laugh, smile, have a swell time,
that you really meant to make me cry, have anger, and wanting me to kill myself,
that I actually thought you really loved me,
you thought I really loved you,
now I guess you were wrong,
wrong for actually being the real you….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikki Au 10 November 2011

ohmaiiigawd~~~~~~~~~this represents me when i had my first fell in love with someone.......

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rago rago 28 April 2009

a good write........but do not be always negative. Fantastic write in a poetical way.

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Saadat Tahir 28 April 2009

thats a new twist on age old feelings nice emotive piece..liked it cheers

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