You Poem by (De Va)
You
In my dreams I see your eyes
So blue and yet so filled with lies.
In my heart I see your soul
So yellow, yet quite unwhole
In my ears, I hear your voice
So sweet, but leaving me no choice
In my soul I see your hatred
So Purple, deep and seems so sacred
In my arms, I feel your flesh
So red, as my skin you thresh
In my mind, I see your demon
So violet, as my pain you summon.
Colors of emotion fill the air with this poem. Count the ways I could say how great a poem it is. With both the heart and the soul. Expressions are described both literal and metaphorically. It is as if I can see this person you speak right now. In the flesh, an image appears as if you painting a portrait. So perfect and eloquent. Down to the very last detail. And then even more. My final words would extravagant but without the negative effects that spending to much effort, time or money would bring. It is the biggest rose I most certainly ever seen.
Powerful words used in this great poem..thanks for sharing (De va)
blue eyes, yellow soul, sweet voice, purple hatred, red flesh, violet demon. beautiful features with dishonest identity! beauty is skin deep! ! ! ! ! your creation is awesome and the rhyme scheme A, A, B, B C, C is fantastic Deva! you are professional! ! ! ! ! really great pleasure to read your works! ! !
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4/23/2024 10:10:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
As always a really great poem. Your poetry is always fantastic.