# *yet The Night Sleeps*# Poem by Dr subhendu kar
# *yet The Night Sleeps*#
it is yet night deep
I have to close my eyes now
For the next day's coffee
And a few spoons of dream
May be sweet or sour that happens to happen
By the rucks of joy or ricks of anger
till sun comes to its usual repose
the patterned by the light and shadow
as we do feel happiness and sorrow
across the life and death spatial
when day is not far off from the dark
clock still reads the carvings by the path
green meadow when mellowed
by its beauty green on the canvas
eyes when transfixed by the desire
passion yet half opened by the colors
night when breaths by deep wilderness,
hours when slowly melt
into the galore of tonight
heart when unconquered by the thirst
'it is yet night deep I have to close my eyes now For the next day’s coffee And a few spoons of dream' What a perfect opening to this tenderhearted poem. Your words evoke the nocturnes of Chopin, in particular their superb performance by Arthur Rubinstein. Your weave a wealth of emotion into every line. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Truly this piece speaks so loudly...so beautifully! This one is definetely one of my favorites...as I can feel what you are feeling.I can see what you see...and the pain of just existing at times seems to haunt this one...in such an unforgetable way. Truly touching my friend....thanx for sharing. wishing U much peace on this day Sub........ .Shelley.
Beautiful imagery, your descriptives are sublime! HG: -) xx
Dr. Kar, Filled with the passion of one who truly writes from the heart...it is so lovely! I danced in between the words...in toe shoes... Dorothy
Awed by the beauty of words- - -It is yet night deep I have to close my eyes now For the next day's coffee and a few spoons of dream
i like the way you make the words flow you drowsuch nice poem. nice poem
a spoon full of dreams i love that nice wording.. Nice verses... Krista
i`m a dark preson so to me your poem are to happy but this one is ok to me
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is an excellent write Dr. Kar! Great use of metaphors here! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad