'Yet, I Shut My Eyes.' Poem by Shania K. Younce

'Yet, I Shut My Eyes.'



Yet, I shut my eyes.

Only to see far wanderers wandering away.

Leaving me, faraway.

I only to see the far wandering gaze.

That's like a wonder, that's wandering over me.

Its extraordinary gaze.

Monday, August 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: ways
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 24 October 2014

Dear Poet, Thank you very much. it is quite accidental i got to read your this poem. well, this is what i have been practicing since ages! i often close my eyes to explore the unexplored, something that never crossed even the most blessed souls of this cute lil planet. it is a real wonder i have landed over your verses. it really is a wonderful experience, an absolute device to chase the sublime visions, that the experiencing soul must keep intact for ages, then reveal to the most deserving generation. God bless. I wish to set out an expedition unto your mind set set while you composed these verses. so, please share with me all you can recall, during the creation of this ecstatic chase. Though not much of poetic conventions followed, your verses made me contemplate deep and compare knowledge and experience, illusions and intuitions, that itself reveals the quality and breed of pure passion. Keep penning. write me, please in detail.

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Mohamed Alpha Ba 28 August 2014

lol..so nice short and well placed of words..........i love it cuz it kinda relief to a certain unpleasant moments

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