Yet. Poem by Vonda Overlie

Yet.



Memories.. always there reminding what use to be.
I thought we were forever?

Promises broken.
A future shattered by a past.

When you promised always and forever,
Did YOU know in the back of your mind?

Conditional love, you should have let me know.
Perhaps I could have done everything right!

That is how deep my love runs.
Anything to make you stay.

Tossed aside like an unwanted gift.
You are digging for the perfect prize.

I was that perfect prize, you just don't realize it.... YET!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 10 January 2015

Aloha Vonda... I am a first timer... to your lines... are your lines so fine? I found one herein... A future shattered by a past. Great line... Do you now know the difference between a great line, and a better subject to elaborate upon that line with? May I suggest you take this same line from this rather limited in thought post, and elaborate an up to this date in time word or more... and get back to me... you know... place your back against my mind... really... this is too cool to do... I trust you will understand... I Understand... read me? All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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