Yesterdays Sorrow Poem by Heather Burns

Yesterdays Sorrow

Rating: 5.0


A gentle rain
begins to fall
washing cares
of life away

clearing
darkened skies
from fragments
of yesterday

a new day has
dawned
looking for
tomorrow

releasing
saddened hearts
from yesterdays
sorrows.



















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Friday, October 4, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 04 October 2013

A great poem, sometimes a new day can be very welcoming, then we can say goodbye to a bad yesterday.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 October 2013

A real beauty..the past is always there to remind us of yesterday. Beautifully penned poem.

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Efe Benjamin 05 October 2013

in my own opinion of the poem: a gentle rain begins to fall, a rain of hope, hope to wash away every past sorrow, and hope for better future, when a new day has dawned. its a soft, gentle poem, full of wit..its a 10 for me

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Wahab Abdul 05 October 2013

A gentle rain begins to fall washing cares of life away clearing darkened skies from fragments of yesterday a new day has dawned looking for tomorrow releasing saddened hearts from yesterdays sorrow....................................excellent write, sweet, it has great meaning and good flow...love it 10...

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Valsa George 05 October 2013

There is a rare gentleness about all your writings! Like a sligt drizzle, it refreshes!

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Amitava Sur 11 October 2013

A short poem definitely with a strong msg that you have to move forward, forgetting the earlier sorrows- with a view to survive

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Roseann Shawiak 10 October 2013

Wonderful poem about moving on from yesterday's sorrows. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 08 October 2013

Phenomenal write. Love the intensity and word choices. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2013

Great Work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Unwritten Soul 06 October 2013

Will be any rain to clear my heart like the rain did to earth...then tears come but pain still not fade away_Soul

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