Yesterday...I Was With You Poem by Unwritten Soul

Yesterday...I Was With You

Rating: 4.5


I am sorry
Deeply from my heart
Do you know today? my dear
I broke your favorite cup...(don't be angry)
When i prepared tea for two
Just i want like to have something
Sipping tea under the full moon like we had yesterday
However today all my fingers got only blood
Cut by the broken glasses
But they are so kind to me
Not enough for me to feel the pain
Not much compared what shattered in my broken heart
Perhaps it consumes all of me, all my strength

Living with your shadow
You are not here today
Glad I still can see your smile
Only by the picture that's how I could now
I know, i must know
That i will never listen to your laughing again
But forever i will remember our last laugh
When i was with you
Yesterday

Do you know my dear?
I never thought it was today
'Why all of sudden you quiet' I said
Maybe you are in better place with Him now
Just yesterday we here and now you gone
Tell me how far it from here
Will you wait for me then
Will you?

I always be missing you forever now
To remember again, i am broken more
Because just yesterday
I was with you
But no more again
Today nor tomorrow

How can I live my day tomorrow
When I cant escape from beautiful yesterday
Yesterday, when i was with you
And today i cant never have it
Never again...

If yesterday never went away
Sure I am here, here still with you
Looking the full moon
But yesterday has died so all of us will soon
But I know someday
Somewhere in a new place
We'll meet again...
Like yesterday
When i was with you

Like yesterday my dear
When i was with you...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's hard to put something like this....i don't know if i supposed to do this...but i wrote this as i inspired by the Valerie, one of my favorite writer in this website. She lost her husband and i was trying to be on her shoes to write the feeling but never i know what she feels... i know she feel pain more than this..Val always strong as i always seen...Just Val, you always have me whatever and whenever you want to share..your friend, Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 20 September 2013

Beautifully expressed Soul, you have captured the essence of bereavement so well. It is a privilege that you are my friend, and I thank you, I am humbled indeed.

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Susan Lacovara 21 September 2013

I loved this poem, my friend, Soul...so well expressed, sent shivers down my spine. Keep the beauty that is shared poetry coming. PEACE and plenty under the full moon we are gifted.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 20 September 2013

Very nice. It reminds me my grand pa death. I was with him five hours ago, then he left us. Its been years since im in the PH, WE ARE A REAL UNIQUE FAMILY!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 September 2013

Dear Soul, your poem is emotionally justified in its out pour of feelings.. But Valerie has begun to cope with the bitter truth and she will soon be in her normal spirits, we hope. Your poem speaks about your intimacy and I think you have written a good poem.

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Lucifera Santez 22 September 2013

a tragic symphony. wonderful work. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2018

A beautiful poem with touching expression in favour of Valerie, your favourite writer in this website has been astutely depicted. I quote...... If yesterday never went away Sure I am here, here still with you Looking the full moon But yesterday has died so all of us will soon But I know someday Somewhere in a new place We'll meet again... Like yesterday When i was with you Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 27 March 2018

A very beautiful poem, Soul. What you capture is the essence, that part of any person, deeply loved, that stays a living part of our lives- -always. A profound work, Soul.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2013

'But yesterday has died so all of us will soon But I know someday Somewhere in a new place We'll meet again... Like yesterday When i was with you' So beautifully said! It's an amazing expression of empathy for a fellow poet, placing oneself in her shoes in her difficult time. My heartfelt condolences to Valerie May God be with her.

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

this is a beautiful touching write very emotional. Recalling many a yesterday. But it will never be repeated. my second read 10

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Rekha Mandagere 02 October 2013

This is a stage and we are all actors. After our role gets over, we take an exit by giving chance for other actors to play their significant roles. This cycle goes on. Ultimately those who met yesterday will meet again in future. Let us conduct our duties and take an exit from this world. Soul you have artistically handled the situation. My love is always with valerie.

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