Yes I Am Talking About You Poem by Vlad Alucard

Yes I Am Talking About You



You make no sense, your sentences never end,
You put words together that leave me numb.
So this public letter I am going to send.
Because what you write, is so incredibly dumb.
So freaking incredibly dumb.

And you are one of the top poets here,
All I can do is shake my head.
Reading your stuff brings me to tears,
Cause what you write is really bad.
It sucks it's so bad.

So Images, spectral or not what do you call your stuff?
I really can't tell heads from tails.
In a short time I've had enough.
Deciphering you stuff just fails.
Just for the record, it just fails.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 04 September 2011

Pretty strong words, for a newcomer.

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