(18 October 1964)

What do you think this poem is about?

Y..... Zebra

Zebra goes to drink
Crocodile jumps
Zebra escapes

Zebra tells son
Not to drink
At that lake

Son goes anyhow
Nothing happens
Son zebra returns

Son thinks
father zebra
does not make sense

Son goes again and again
Son convinced father is wrong
Until one day….

Submitted: Monday, July 16, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, July 18, 2012


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  • Valerie Dohren (7/17/2012 12:14:00 PM)

    Kids never listen to their parents do they, and this is the consequence - lessons learnt the hard way. Very well penned.

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/17/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    thought provoking poem and well written!

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  • Unwritten Soul (7/17/2012 1:00:00 AM)

    National geographic in poem hunter? ? ? hahahaha joking! well the lesson well learned from both documented write! :) _Unwritten Soul

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  • Heather Wilson (7/16/2012 11:40:00 AM)

    Poor son Zebra, he should have listened to his dad, a clever write.

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