Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,199 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. Winning whisper


An ominous, gloomy cloud
Of anger, frustration and shout
It darkens our sky, it’s getting loud
It’s about to thunder and rain out.

But there deep in our hearts
There is a whisper that starts
It is a whisper of unconditional love
Perhaps coming from high above

What will happen, ‘ll fully depend
on what we listen to more in the end
To the thunder, shall we give in?
Or will we let the soft whisper win?

Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 5,737 Points * Sunprincess * (1/24/2014 6:17:00 PM)

    ~To the thunder, shall we give in?
    Or will we let the soft whisper win? ~

    ......beautiful closing lines...and I agree with unwritten soul's positive message...nice write.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lawrence H (1/24/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    good poem for whispering in the air or about love, about many things we image. thumb up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,214 Points Valsa George (10/15/2013 12:07:00 AM)

    A pertinent question.... Though the rumble of thunder is deadening and the whisper of love is so soft, no doubt love will win at the end! A very sweet and meaningful poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Joseph Anderson (9/19/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    Let us hope that soft whisper wins. A great analogy of mankinds basic thinking-Brief and well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/17/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    But there deep in our hearts
    There is a whisper that starts
    It is a whisper of unconditional love
    Perhaps coming from high above
    /the whisper of unconditional love/ love to read your poems...
    I feel the Fragrance of Innocence in your poems! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Rekha Mandagere (9/14/2013 6:18:00 PM)

    The world smiles as we smile with it. The universal concept, LOVE is always enchanting man. Love in its unconditional form is the greatest love on this earth. Very nice expression as always: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Unwritten Soul (9/14/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    Let the whisper from our inner, from self even it is not from others..It just not only a whisper but wake up from the dream, that we rise from the darkness to walk into a real life scene..with courage our skin and vision across the light beam, we will win..we will win! _Soul (Report) Reply

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