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(18 October 1964)

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Y/. Winning whisper

An ominous, gloomy cloud
Of anger, frustration and shout
It darkens our sky, it’s getting loud
It’s about to thunder and rain out.

But there deep in our hearts
There is a whisper that starts
It is a whisper of unconditional love
Perhaps coming from high above

What will happen, ‘ll fully depend
on what we listen to more in the end
To the thunder, shall we give in?
Or will we let the soft whisper win?

Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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  • * Sunprincess * (1/24/2014 6:17:00 PM)

    ~To the thunder, shall we give in?
    Or will we let the soft whisper win? ~

    ......beautiful closing lines...and I agree with unwritten soul's positive message...nice write..

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  • Lawrence Hiung (1/24/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    good poem for whispering in the air or about love, about many things we image. thumb up

  • Smoky Hoss (10/28/2013 4:46:00 PM)

    Beautiful, and wonderful words!

  • Valsa George (10/15/2013 12:07:00 AM)

    A pertinent question.... Though the rumble of thunder is deadening and the whisper of love is so soft, no doubt love will win at the end! A very sweet and meaningful poem! !

  • Valerie Dohren (9/24/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Beautiful and thoughtful write. A whisper of love sounds wonderful.

  • marvin brato (9/24/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    Great thought and rhyming, excellent style! Well-penned!

  • Marieta Maglas (9/20/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem having a deep meaning, thank you for sharing

  • Joseph Anderson (9/19/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    Let us hope that soft whisper wins. A great analogy of mankinds basic thinking-Brief and well done

  • Vipins Puthooran (9/17/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    But there deep in our hearts
    There is a whisper that starts
    It is a whisper of unconditional love
    Perhaps coming from high above
    /the whisper of unconditional love/ love to read your poems...
    I feel the Fragrance of Innocence in your poems! ! ! ! !

  • Rekha Mandagere (9/14/2013 6:18:00 PM)

    The world smiles as we smile with it. The universal concept, LOVE is always enchanting man. Love in its unconditional form is the greatest love on this earth. Very nice expression as always: -)

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