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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,196 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... Unblind


Tonight,
I saw the nightly light
Creating a glorious sight
On a field of grass

Then i suddenly realised
That all day long
I had been blinded

Only now at night
I saw the glorious sight
Of nightly light
On the grass

I had not seen any glory
The whole day long
something must 've blinded me

Blinded by sunlight?
Or blinded by buzz?
By clutter and buzz
Of a busy day

Blinded by the rush
By a bout of anger
By things that matter little
I had missed the glory of the day

I had missed the glory
Of all the trees i'd passed
The glory of the grass
Of sea and skies

I had missed the glory
Of all the friendship
Of all the love and kindness
Of everyone i'd met

Oh, my God,
I must have been blind
Blind to all this glory
Blind to all this grace

Please, my God,
Unblind me
So tomorrow i will see
The world in all its glory

The glory of the skies and sea
Of the grass and trees
Of everyone around me
Please god help me see




Aufie Zophy
Oct,2012, Bachok





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Submitted: Monday, October 01, 2012
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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  • Rookie - 910 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/16/2012 2:44:00 AM)

    Dis poem is apreciative of d glory of God dat we tend to take forgrantd, so kudos poet 4 a splendid poem dat i add to my fav list (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 920 Points Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    Thank you! I wonder if we are forced to keep the eyes closed. Otherwise, I suppose we could not survive in this world we may need to be half blind, in order to follow the society's rules and to keep in control we may have to chain our souls. Are the most heavy chains those braided with love? Maybe, would I have to learn the hard way as you say that love is only a chain of very light wings to fly with the winds? ! Your poems are always inspiring, love them dearly, thank you for share! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 584 Points Smoky Hoss (10/11/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    Stunning words; such depth of meaning, and wisdom! One of my favorites indeed. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Lyn Paul (10/8/2012 12:15:00 AM)

    Thank you Hans, so beautifully written, You have touched many with your words. Have a Happy Birthday Too! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/6/2012 3:59:00 AM)

    Good job! I feel something deeply from this poem.But words fail to express.Well done! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (10/5/2012 11:44:00 AM)

    nice poem..you are at least lucky coz you realize yourself in time and that you should plea
    I wish may you be unblinded any more...Great job! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Kelvin Owusu (10/5/2012 2:23:00 AM)

    John Lennon: Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
    this to me is a good read and write nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,532 Points Valerie Dohren (10/2/2012 1:57:00 PM)

    We are always so busy that we fail to observe what is going on around us at a deeper level - good write Aifie. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (10/1/2012 5:20:00 PM)

    Often a situation, the blind see and the deaf hears....because they see and hear with their hearts. Beautiful poem Hans! A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 657 Points Unwritten Soul (10/1/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    I really love this, you tell what i am feeling to myself right now, it seems like you know what i feel..and you tell this on behalf of me? ? ? i guess i have nothing more to say because what you say here is what i really wanted to tell.i love it..thanks Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

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