Y.. The Cloud Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.. The Cloud

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A sublime white cloud
Hanging above the sea
Fluffy and streaky
Transparent and bright
White and blue
Fully abstract
A marvellous sight

That cloud,
So nice.
No ancient Greek,
Nor Michelangelo
Nor Van Gogh, Nor Picasso
Has ever made anything
Of such astonishing beauty

Such a sublime piece of art
Sculpted, painted,
By the Ultimate Master
Of all Sculptors, painters

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 24 August 2011

a moment of total awareness! good poem!

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Elena Sandu 28 October 2011

Yes! A thousand times yes! True! No human hand can continually spread layer after layer of unique beauty as our Mother Nature does. We can try to keep a memory of it by making copies more or less acurate but we can never Create real pure beauty, one after another.. Not in this time and space. Altough I shall contradict myself again and ask: planting a tree couldn't be a creation? A baby's smile is it not a beauty? A flower? We could give such beauty one after another, could we? Please pardon my bubbling there are times that I need to show how ingnorant I am. Lol, as like it is not very obvious.. See what your amaisingly good poem does, messing with my soul or mind and I think it will stick with me for a while..

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Miriam Maia Padua 24 October 2011

The wisdom of God will always amaze us.. and you have successfully laid your concept to us... you and your have wonderful ideas...nice thoughts keep on sharing...

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Richard McClellan 21 October 2011

I like this one, you should read my poem 'Nature at Its' Best' that I posted for my great aunt Jewell Partee... Its similar in nature...

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Vipins Puthooran 31 August 2011

Sublime beauty of nature rest in God's hand. A true art.

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Patti Masterman 25 August 2011

It's true; the best art always imitates nature. Nobody does it like Mother. ;)

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