Y... The Breeze Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... The Breeze

Rating: 4.5


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A warm welcoming wind
embraces me with endless caress.
The pores of my skin inhale
I open my eyes but soon shut them back

Healing oxygen, overflowing with air
Tender goodness soaking all of my cells
My mind is penning superlatives
while my spirit is lightly afloat

Sunday, November 6, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Igor Balatsky 23 January 2012

It is so exciting – becoming a wind for a while.) May your floating be always light-winged!

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Ken E Hall 15 November 2011

Sounds like a perfect massage by nature with a perfect end line...regards

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Walterrean Salley 12 November 2011

It’s amazing the affects that nature has: to purge, cleanse and transform. Here, the wind is like a positive entity - cleansing and imparting inspiration, wherein you find yourself pleasantly rapture. Very well presented. 10

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