The most beautiful appearance
of the moon is early at night
when it stands low in the sky
A big pinkish orangey ball
The most beautiful appearance
Of the sun is at twilight
When it stands low
Just above the horizon
How about us?
Stunning! loved it...i loved moon at early night too but still like it till it hiding after dawn...about your question how about ourselves? ? i guess we will give the best when we keep shining the hope like there is an early night from the moon but still also shining bright to like the sun to end the day with the bright heart as we can...Standing low is great because we are having low profile but high attitudes, down to earth but high vision above_Soul
I guess we are at our best symbolically at noon when the sun (our inner self) shines brightest - great write.
Oh I love this. A profound thought wrapped in the most simple and lucid expression.
So true, so many people get left behind for all the wrong reasons we all have so much to give, to reach out to help is a sign of true greatness for all the right reasons! ! Beautiful write!
Such a wonderful poem with a great understanding of life in the notes.
When we see through the inner light...the beauty of what we see, shows the best! Often, a blind man sees, and the normal eyes are blinded....that is the wisdom of this world! Really nice poem...! A 10++
Our beauty, or otherwise, lies within our souls. This piece is thought provoking.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely images to interpret profound thoughts. A great message imparted.