Y/. Revolution Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/. Revolution

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Rolling waves are roaring
One word they roar:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

My flying feathered friends
One word they sing:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution caring kindness

Flaming orange clouds are painting
One word they paint:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

Whizzing winds are whispering
One word they whisper:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

Oh, yes it is
in the waves of the sea
in the song of the birds
in the clouds in the sky
in the sound of the winds
A huge kindness revolution
And it is coming soon.

Listen, look,
Plunge in, float towards
Embrace, Enjoy

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When an idea's time has come, it is amazing how the magic of the universe works together to materialise it. While I was looking if my new poem was listed on the main page, I saw the title of the poem: Envisaged Cosmic Kindness by Terry Craddock. A poem also talking about a similar idea, perhaps even in a much more poetic way than mine.

Kindness is in the air. Let us all be part of this huge revolution.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 22 February 2014

Revolution of love Revolution of life Revolution of caring kindness this is my kind of revolution, the revolution I live and love for, let us all embrace this revolution of loving kindness :)

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Elena Sandu 29 April 2014

How right you are dear friend! Your poem holds thousands of years of hungered souls. Yes the revolution of love already started, love-ism is the future of our world. I will try to read the recommended poem also. Thank you for share.

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

.lets hoope that the revolution comes soon, ...........everything in this write..enrages us to rise and revolt! ..........lovely

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Dave Walker 03 March 2014

There is nothing like a good old revolution, a great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 24 February 2014

We need this revolution so much, let's hope it comes soon. Very inspiring poem Aufie.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

Beautiful poem. I liked the flow of words. Yes, everything thing is speaking in revolution. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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