Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,898 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. Revolution


Rolling waves are roaring
One word they roar:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

My flying feathered friends
One word they sing:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution caring kindness

Flaming orange clouds are painting
One word they paint:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

Whizzing winds are whispering
One word they whisper:
Revolution

Revolution of love
Revolution of life
Revolution of caring kindness

Oh, yes it is
in the waves of the sea
in the song of the birds
in the clouds in the sky
in the sound of the winds
A huge kindness revolution
And it is coming soon.

Listen, look,
Plunge in, float towards
Embrace, Enjoy

Submitted: Saturday, February 22, 2014
Edited: Saturday, February 22, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

When an idea's time has come, it is amazing how the magic of the universe works together to materialise it. While I was looking if my new poem was listed on the main page, I saw the title of the poem: Envisaged Cosmic Kindness by Terry Craddock. A poem also talking about a similar idea, perhaps even in a much more poetic way than mine.

Kindness is in the air. Let us all be part of this huge revolution.

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  • Freshman - 1,148 Points Elena Sandu (4/29/2014 6:51:00 PM)

    How right you are dear friend! Your poem holds thousands of years of hungered souls. Yes the revolution of love already started, love-ism is the future of our world. I will try to read the recommended poem also. Thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (4/10/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    Fight badness with goodness, fire with water, anger with calmness. When the masses speaks about peace...it cannot be ignored! Keep the roaring waves of peaceful message coming, rolling...let us all swim with it! Thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 84 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    .lets hoope that the revolution comes soon, ...........everything in this write..enrages us to rise and revolt! ..........lovely (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,602 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 5:26:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. I liked the flow of words. Yes, everything thing is speaking in revolution. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,699 Points Terry Craddock (2/22/2014 5:22:00 AM)

    Revolution of love
    Revolution of life
    Revolution of caring kindness

    this is my kind of revolution, the revolution I live and love for, let us all embrace this revolution of loving kindness :) (Report) Reply

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