Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,107 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ News?


I sat on my porch
and just in front my eyes
two butter colored butterflies
made the most lovely and sexy dance
around a thick white flowery branch.

I worked a bit in my garden
and just next to my hands
I saw seven industrious ants.
They carried together a grain of rice
with loving dedication, isnt this nice?

I made a walk on the beach.
There was a couple holding hands.
I saw so many families and friends,
sharing lots of drinks and food,
sharing jokes and much of good.

I came inside; on was the TV.
A newspaper lying in front of me.
What did I see?

Submitted: Friday, March 08, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 08, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

There often such an enormous gap between the world we experience and what we read and see on tv and in the news.
Without denying the many problems in the world, it may be a good idea to now and then switch of the TV for a day.

Comments about this poem (Y/ News? by Aufie Zophy )

  • Veteran Poet - 3,181 Points Walterrean Salley (4/30/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    A television certainly can change one's focus in an instant, and spoil the picture - putting a damper on one's whole day. Very well said Hans. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/16/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    Wow oh yes dat is refreshing images recollectd in a super creative way in poem! Better watch dat than d bloody scene tv. Thanx too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (3/12/2013 6:08:00 PM)

    Yes...nature teaches, nature enriches the soul, without nature humanity is a desert! I make it a point to see less n less of that box now...news manipulated! Excellent message. A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (3/11/2013 2:56:00 PM)

    We spend far too much time in front of the TV, or the computer screen. Wise poem, with good advice to get out there and see what's going on. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (3/9/2013 11:26:00 AM)

    I just loved this, a very beautiful....for now i am very happy as i avoiding the TV all times where i found true things to do..but sometimes we still need to get on news to know what is world tells...sometimes when we sober enough we can filter whats good whats not....its like a kid try to cheat and adult, too wise to be fooled but too nice to be ignored..just for fun nothing so serious we should be sometimes_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Joseph Anderson (3/8/2013 9:46:00 AM)

    A stroll through nature's garden can clear ones mind and cleanse his soul.
    This is a beauty of a write with worthy thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (3/8/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    Very nice and interesting thought-write.
    So someone rightly commented LIFE WAS SO SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL; when apples and blackberrys were just fruits! ! (Report) Reply

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