Y// If The Sky Were Water Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// If The Sky Were Water

Rating: 5.0


If the sky were water
It would be a favorite diving site
The deep and bright green trees
Being wonderful corals
With birds as singing fishes
From the superb morning skies
One would not want to miss a cloud
Crowds 'd dive in the dark of the night
With its spectacle of moon and stars
But for now, the sky is 'only' sky

Thursday, July 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: skies
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How many of my more than eightteenK days have gone by
without me paying any attention to the beauty of the sky?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Your imagination is very poetic in nature to make wonderful flow. If sky were water then this would definitely diving site of favorite mind. Amazing really this is.10

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Unwritten Soul 29 July 2016

and the stars would be the shiniest jelly fish in the sky....this thought you wrote here really captivates me :)

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Hans Vr 29 July 2016

thanks, Soul, for your uplifting comments

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

Imagination! ! With the beauty of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Hans Vr 29 July 2016

Thanks Edward, for the appreciating comment.

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