Y/.. Gold Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/.. Gold

Rating: 4.6


My mug is full of gold
and i am not happy
It is love that I need

I try to be loved
But no one loves
It is love that I need

I try to give love
Many give back
It is love that I need

Gold is fine, beautiful
I want it, I love it
But it is love that I need

I need love

Saturday, August 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 September 2014

Yes love is human need frm birth to death. Yor poem is sincere n lovely. Long may u write. So nice to read u again.

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Heather Wilkins 09 September 2014

love is more precious than gold so they say a nice write

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 September 2014

Love is bliss and Gold is kiss....both are desires yet love satisfy the soul, gold to show and love to keep..nice lovely

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Walterrean Salley 10 September 2014

A wonderful message with a great theme and images.

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Spiritual Seeker 06 October 2014

Yes, we need a golden heart that gives and shares... a golden message, a shining 10

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Spiritual Seeker 06 October 2014

Yes we need a golden heart that give and shares...a 10

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

Gold is fine beautiful. Love is valuable. It shines like gold ever. Beautiful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2014

We all need love, but sadly there is such a lack of it.

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Abekah Emmanuel 16 September 2014

Indeed, gold is a traesure but can never be compared to the value of love. The joy, relief, healing, and the enlightenment that love brings are incomparable. Nice and touching poem....well done!

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