Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 2,106 Points (18 October 1964)

Y... Elegant Violence


After five days of gloom
and dark monsoon,
sparks of colour in the sunrise
betray an enticing pause in the season

Strong winds still stand
and sweep up white chunks of water
that jump out of the sea
in violent bouts of elegance



- - - - - - - - - -
beach beach beach beach
beach beach beach beach

sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea sea sea sea sea sea
sea sea sea

Submitted: Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Edited: Friday, April 05, 2013

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  • Rookie - 284 Points Drashi Shah (10/30/2014 7:25:00 AM)

    i must say you are great beach lover..... nice poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 334 Points Patti Masterman (2/27/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    Lovely lines, I could visualize the scene just from reading this. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (12/10/2011 6:48:00 AM)

    How can nature betrays nature, sunrise backstabbing monsoon? how about monsoon steal from sunshine? ? ....hmmm i dont know but i may say the nature having different moods...just like us, sunny smile and gloomy feelings...and the emotions carry different strength...like us sometimes action followed but what we feel, and the violence of nature expressing what happen to the world...we may keep all in ourself but nature keep all with us...why? because we in nature contentment... we need to see nature act as our behavior..maybe it's work :) because it just the rule of nature, and written by God's hand _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,181 Points Walterrean Salley (12/7/2011 9:07:00 PM)

    This piece shows your ability to tap in and share some of nature's most guarded characteristics for our amusement. Beautifully done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,172 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/5/2011 12:24:00 AM)

    vioence is elegant when we are not the casuality. well said (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/4/2011 8:16:00 PM)

    An elegant short write describing one of the beauties of Mother Nature! Thank you for sharing! Keep it up, my dear friend! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (12/3/2011 6:38:00 PM)

    Violence of nature always in such beautiful words and style. agreed no less for nature makes us wonder.
    Poet make it more astonish with beautiful thought and beautiful write...! ! ! ! Fabulous. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/2/2011 3:44:00 PM)

    'tis an elegant poem, excellent write! /10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (12/1/2011 10:15:00 AM)

    What more can I say...simply beautiful and elegant!
    Enjoy your monsoon Hans..while it last. A great 10. (Report) Reply

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