Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience

Rating: 5.0


A whiff of conscience
whispers in our heart
listening in absolute silence
hearing it, a work of art

A bright flame of goodness
for our eyes to see
A fire of rightness
warmth on our skin to feel

Soft winds of love, so kind
blowing breeze of soul
illuminating our mind
an ideal, an inspirational call

Nectar of honesty
Roses of integrity
Aromas dancing merrily
Cherry blossoms of charity

A whiff of conscience
Sitting somewhere deep inside
Shining throughout the universe
An inextinguishable light


(Bachok,3 July 2014)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Related to a reflection I made yesterday:
http: //reflectionsbyhans.blogspot.com/2014/07/reflection-64-conscience.html
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Really like this poem and all that it allies to! Some great lines in here! Love the line, Cherry blossoms of charity. Very beautiful imagery throughout!

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Neela Nath Das 06 July 2014

Conscience acts as light.It dispels the darkness of mind.A beautiful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

Let's hope that whiff of conscience will always be around to keep us all in check, although sadly for some, , this is often not the case. Great write Hans.

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Valsa George 14 July 2014

In the stillness of silence we hear a mysterious whisper like a gentle whiff of wind passing over, communing with our soul urging us to do actions which have the aroma of roses and the beauty of cherry blossoms...... It whispers to us what is good and what is evil..... It is a segment of the Universal Spirit! Beautiful poem.... Reading this I felt it has close resemblance to one of my poems.... at least in content... A Mysterios Voice. I invite you to read it!

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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

Holocaust Turning Hearts Or Blind Eye Choices beautiful minds illuminating beautiful souls a whiff of conscience sows righteous heroic deeds when nightmare lives oppose dictator tyrants Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

'A whiff of conscience whispers in our heart' beautiful lines illuminating beautiful souls, an exquisite masterpiece Aufie

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2014

Excellent poem, so simple and poignant. Our souls do whisper to us, if we'd only listen. Fantastic imagery throughout, flowing with a rhythm of spirituality. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Spiritual Seeker 20 July 2014

simply love this poem...soo nice to read in this blessed spiritual month! ! A wonderous big 10!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 July 2014

Excellently written poem but sadly as Valerie has put it, for some its really not the case, some don't even have conscience at all. I wish many people would read this superb poem of yours Hans. Siya_! !

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