X11-I Did Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

X11-I Did

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(Introductory poem of my episode-DEAD PETALS)

Do you see the sunrise on that pretty child's face?
-It seems brighter having an angel's trace.
Do you see the moon sleeping on his bed?
-Embracing the darkness, that's what he said.
Do you see the shadows as they creep away?
-I do, they crept away as you stay.
Do you dream of me in your sleep, do you love me?
-(Sighs and then turning away) I did.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geovanni Leaño 11 February 2008

Nice Jane! ^_^ I somehow can relate to this poem! ahehe... but i'm not the persona... thanks for sharing! ^_^ let me know if the 'DEAD PETALS' is done!

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Melvin Banggollay 04 February 2008

A wonderful piece, nice write. Well, did you dream of me in your dream, you asked and I answered, Yes, I did. thanks for sharing, love lots, melvin

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