X..... Haiku: Changing Colours Poem by Aufie Zophy

X..... Haiku: Changing Colours



A fluffy cloud drifts
Closer to the setting sun
And its colours change

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 30 July 2011

You are the observant! ! ! Your idea always wise and well crafted..! ! ! Excellent! !

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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

This emphasizes the power, beauty and magic in nature, which is sometimes overlooked, but thanks for the awareness. Hans, I think that you are quite good with haikus. So go for it.

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