X..... Early Dinner Poem by Aufie Zophy

X..... Early Dinner

Rating: 5.0


The setting sun
is struggling
to fight the darkness,
but is slowly giving in

A magic light red cloud in the sky
shines through crowns of casuarinas
majestically dancing on the rhythm
of the cool evening breeze

The fading red light
accentuates the silhouettes
of crisscrossing bats,
looking for an early dinner

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erika Wingo 24 November 2012

I really love your wording in this piece, it melts the soul as you read it.

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Rekha Mandagere 19 July 2011

A grand setting for dinner. Lovely feelings brings joy and happiness. I will surely join your family today for nice dinner.I give 10+....if dinner is well arranged.

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Spiritual Seeker 16 July 2011

Another of your masterpiece Hans...already feeling I am there watching the bats having early dinner! A great 10.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 12 July 2011

The setting sun / is struggling / to fight the darkness, Beautiful. Regards, pranab 10+

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